As I travel into the distant galaxy of the unknown species their force field is stopping me, but they have a very abundant source of technology which is causing a gigantic disturbance in my head. It’s like they have a dense existence but they own a very big territory with a lot of shiny and disturbing metallic features.
Tuesday, June 12, 2018
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Hi Lachlan it is me Harry from Marshland School. I liked the way you explained everything that you knew and also put in all punctuation. Did you think about making it a bit more bigger? But apart from that it was very interesting and cool.
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